Evaluating past studants work!
Student one - 1st blog
Planning and Research:
Strengths-
Had a clear, detailed planning diagram. Good explanations as to why he picked certain things such as the name of his thriller 'Reloaded'. He also had some good research on the 20th Century Fox big mainstream Hollywood company and why he used them for some things.
Weeknesses-
Could have had a more fun, colourful layout design to his planning/research making it more exciting to want to read.
(Level 3 - 15/20)
Construcion:
Strenghts-
The music worked well as it kept to the whole idea/theme of his film 'Thriller'. The first person perspective of when someone is in the bin was extremely good as it gave us the feel that something was indeed in the bin, and it showed us it from their point of view. This made me watching it want to go ahead and watch more.
Weeknesses-
The opening titles were far too long, i just wanted it to start! The sound was extremely loud especially the scene where the man was putting rubbish in the bin!
(Level 2 - 30/60)
Evaluation:
Strenghts-
Good, simple, clear reasons for what he thought his strengths and weeknesses were.
Weeknesses-
Could have got some advice on what other people thought of his final piece in order to give him some strengths and weeknesses!
(Level 2 - 9/20)
Had a clear, detailed planning diagram. Good explanations as to why he picked certain things such as the name of his thriller 'Reloaded'. He also had some good research on the 20th Century Fox big mainstream Hollywood company and why he used them for some things.
Weeknesses-
Could have had a more fun, colourful layout design to his planning/research making it more exciting to want to read.
(Level 3 - 15/20)
Construcion:
Strenghts-
The music worked well as it kept to the whole idea/theme of his film 'Thriller'. The first person perspective of when someone is in the bin was extremely good as it gave us the feel that something was indeed in the bin, and it showed us it from their point of view. This made me watching it want to go ahead and watch more.
Weeknesses-
The opening titles were far too long, i just wanted it to start! The sound was extremely loud especially the scene where the man was putting rubbish in the bin!
(Level 2 - 30/60)
Evaluation:
Strenghts-
Good, simple, clear reasons for what he thought his strengths and weeknesses were.
Weeknesses-
Could have got some advice on what other people thought of his final piece in order to give him some strengths and weeknesses!
(Level 2 - 9/20)
The students blog - http://amanveermediacw.blogspot.com/
Student two- 2nd blog
Planning and research:
Strengths -
This student has made extremely good use of his attention to detail on researching for his film. He has very good detailed resons to why he researched what he did-extremely detailed.
Weeknesses-
Could have had some explanations as to how he made some decisions for his film.
(Level 4 - 17/20)
Construction:
Strengths -
The flickers of the flash backs were very clever and creative. It was easily understandable and i understood exactly what was going on throughout i was not lost or confused at all. The close-ups to his face was good because it enabled us to see his facial expressions. It helped us as an audience see that something had previously happened.
Weeknesses -
He could have used some darker/duller lighting to stick with his theme of a thriller.
(Level 4 - 56/60)
Evaluation:
Strengths -
Clear, decise, reasons for improving his piece. Various ways of posting many of his evaluations on to his blog. Very detailed and descriptive.
Weeknesses -
This student has wrote a very large amount, but has made accurate and clear decisions, the only weekness i could suggest might be that he has wrote an awful lot.
(Level 4 - 18/20)
The students blog - http://jbchandler1.blogspot.com/
Planning and research:
Strengths -
This student has made extremely good use of his attention to detail on researching for his film. He has very good detailed resons to why he researched what he did-extremely detailed.
Weeknesses-
Could have had some explanations as to how he made some decisions for his film.
(Level 4 - 17/20)
Construction:
Strengths -
The flickers of the flash backs were very clever and creative. It was easily understandable and i understood exactly what was going on throughout i was not lost or confused at all. The close-ups to his face was good because it enabled us to see his facial expressions. It helped us as an audience see that something had previously happened.
Weeknesses -
He could have used some darker/duller lighting to stick with his theme of a thriller.
(Level 4 - 56/60)
Evaluation:
Strengths -
Clear, decise, reasons for improving his piece. Various ways of posting many of his evaluations on to his blog. Very detailed and descriptive.
Weeknesses -
This student has wrote a very large amount, but has made accurate and clear decisions, the only weekness i could suggest might be that he has wrote an awful lot.
(Level 4 - 18/20)
The students blog - http://jbchandler1.blogspot.com/
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