Feedback!
Hear are some examples of feedback i got from other students...
==> I like the way you used the arrows to indicate the movement, and the song compliments it aswell. You could also tell what is happening in the story. (Zarna Patel)==> I like the way you have included the title "Megans Story" at the beginning of your animatic storyboad, telling the audeince whats happening and who it involves i.e. Megan. I like how you have included the arrows on your storyboard to show the audience of the camera movement. :) (Anmole Mughal)
==> I like the flow of your opening sequence, I like how you have used the title so we can understand what its about and how you included some of the credits. Some of the drawings were dificults to understand but overall i liked your animatic storyboard :) x (Anna Martin)
==> I liked your animatic storyboard as it well showed the audience what is going to happen in your opening sequence. The music also fits well of the opening sequence. The arrows used where also a useful tool in understanding what was going on. (Gemma Doherty)
Improvements...
I have had alot of positive feedback from some of my class mates and so this indicates to me that not alot needs changing for my animatic. Also they have prasied a few things such as adding a title making it clear to the audience what the film is going to be about and whos in it. Also using arrows to indicate which way the camera is going to move. One thing one person said was that some of the drawings were hard to understand the reasons for that is because i uploaded it on to youtube and it became a bit faint but other than that everyone seemed to really like our idea!!
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