Written Feedback
Our class mates gave us some very positive feedback towards are first draft of our opening sequence. They said they liked our match on action shots. They also like our creativity of the shots we used for example the different angels we shot Stephanie (Megan), from behind her shoulder opening the cupboard and from inside the cupboard her taking the vodka bottle and slamming the door. A few things they said to improve on were that they didn't think we needed the shot from Steph's point of view when she was going to wipe her eye, that was because they think the shot after worked perfectly fine on its own without using the point of view shot for this moment. Me and my partner after this then decided to totally get rid that shot like our class mates said and it still worked really well. Another good comment they liked about our piece was that they really like how we done some of our point of view shots as they thought it enabled them as viewers to really step into the shoes of our main character 'Megan', but overall our draft has been a success with a few things we need to change.
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